a bit odd
the intro stuff is just kind of loud..the hi hat could use variation, its just straight and non-dynamic...the song is more redeeming in the second half though, you manage to apply some nice gooey, haunting sounds well and the bell thing seems to add nicely.
Theres some potential here, keep at it
I actually think the first half is better; it is good that I decided to mix it up in order satisfy the audience. :)
Subtle and elegant, great blend of instruments creating a simple-but-atmospheric sound.
One of the offbeats seem sour though, double check that..it could be just me though.
Im eager to hear the finished product :)
Hmm sour eh? I'll see what i can do about that. I don't hear it but i'll check it more when i work on it a bit more =) Thanks for the input!
great composition, runs fluidly and gives atmosphere despite being a calmer song. The 2:00 mark really makes an impact!
I was hoping for that. ;)
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